Post by Amalcas on Mar 23, 2005 22:18:29 GMT -5
Random bit of inspiration hit me while turning off the shower. I started singing this slow, almost haunting tune, which eventually turned out to this:
Broken ground
And slumber deep
What hooves are these
Disturb my sleep?
What whispered tale
They tell this time
To glorify
A shameless crime?
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War and shame
I never knew
But storms are vast
And troubles brew
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Still writing it (past the divider was not in the original in any form), but I like it so far. I've been trying to make a decent recording, but my mike is, to sum it up, amazingly bad. It sounds like a tenor through a tin can, which is odd, considering I am a bass.
The falsetto voice that you get when you speed it up, ironically, sounded quite good, as far as those things go..... ;D
Broken ground
And slumber deep
What hooves are these
Disturb my sleep?
What whispered tale
They tell this time
To glorify
A shameless crime?
-------------------------
War and shame
I never knew
But storms are vast
And troubles brew
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Still writing it (past the divider was not in the original in any form), but I like it so far. I've been trying to make a decent recording, but my mike is, to sum it up, amazingly bad. It sounds like a tenor through a tin can, which is odd, considering I am a bass.
The falsetto voice that you get when you speed it up, ironically, sounded quite good, as far as those things go..... ;D
